Myths & Fables

9/23/2015

Instructions: Look at the picture. Add to the legend about what's happening, what's going to happen or what has happened in a five-sentence continuation of the piece before yours. Your contribution has to flow seamlessly, be descriptive and give life to the image. The only way to pull that off is to use figurative language, literary techniques, and definitely punctuation. The final result will be ONE full legend about the image. I will start. If you go over or fall under five sentences, you will get a zero.

Before you respond, make sure you include your first AND last name AND class period.

Be sure to--

Be clear about your position
Provide specific support for your argument
Use rhetorical devices and other grammar elements
Write EPIC Content-Engaging, Powerful, Informative, Creative

CAUTION!! Do NOT embarrass me, yourself, your class, the English department, the school or your parents with tasteless, meaningless comments. This is for a grade.

Due: September 25, 2015 11:59 p.m. CST

delmetria "ms. d." millener

9/23/2015 05:58:29 am

Outside, the dark, quiet evening was screaming foul play. The sky was an eerie greenish-yellow, the air was thick with dread, the streets were wet but looked painted with a gloss so slick, it was a mirror's reflection. Inside, each apartment was its own circus. People were doing what people do—except in that one window. And if you looked close enough, the trouble that was brewing was glaring.

Tyrell Alexander 3rd

9/25/2015 05:00:09 am

The dark, quiet evening was approaching to be a horror movie. The steeet was so quiet, I could hear my heart beat. As I got closer to my house, a big man dressed in all black was walking with a gun pointing it at me. Nobody was in sight to save me! Shocked, tired, and scared I was as he got ready to pull the trigger, turned out it was April fools.

Keyvion smith

9/25/2015 11:00:04 pm

The night was quite in the town of Grover vill the air was cold crispy with street lights to light the way I, was walking home from college to anyone else I would look imposing guy standing at 6-feet and 1-inches with my bulky hoode jacket with the hood over my head so you would only see the bottom part of my mouth. A I walked people were hurrying up and closing there curtains as I passed by as if I would kill them and take there valuables till I got my street and one of my neighbors regonized told her friends there nothing to worry about i'm just her next door neighbor that is working on my digere

alexander rollins 3rd period

9/26/2015 11:52:59 am

Shhhhh, do you hear that? I hear people screaming. These people are louder than tornado sirens. I can see people running, in front of the crowd is a fat kid running with a terrified look on his face. I asked him what is running from he replies “the demon" , I push the fat kid down and run for my dear life.

Ebone Bearden p1

9/25/2015 10:59:43 pm

I could see lamps flying through the air like giant saucers. I became startled along with being worried.Next I seen a pale freckled women get thrown into the wall like a small dart into a large target. My hands began to shake as I dialed 911 knowing she was in some type of trouble.

jessica Reaux 3rd

9/26/2015 03:26:34 am

Slick crimson blood oozes like water from her mouth as she staggers limply towards my frightened body. I reached out a teetering hand, helping her up from her hunched-over position as a wave of disgust bubbles in the root of my stomach. The pavement shakes with the emotions drilling from my brains but it wasn't a time to stop and reflect. It was a time to do or be killed and I wasn't ready to die. Just as her eyes burned with a crazing for hunger, I lunge away- not shocked but repulsed. She has the infection.

micah kelly 4thp

9/26/2015 03:30:50 am

I felt as if something was pulling me straight into that one particular apartment at the very top right. Letting my curiosity get to me I decided to go inside the entrance of the apartments. I took a long deep breathe , My stomach began to churn as I stepped inside. I quickly got into an open elevator and clicked on the third floor. The lights in the elevator began to flick on and off the elevator suddenly stopped and wouldn't open. My heart began beating a thousand miles per hour I knew something strange was definitely going on.

Deandria Greenwood 4th Period

9/26/2015 04:01:14 am

I placed my back against the still elevator doors and melted into my knees . My mind is racing , I have to find a way to get this elevator back running . I pressed all the buttons a million times then suddenly , I felt movement . The elevator went up but it passed the third floor and all my fear came back at once . " Why is it not going to the 3rd floor ? Why did it not stop ? " I cried out .

De'Sha Britton

9/26/2015 03:25:01 am

I hid in the darkest spot and waited for the operator to pick up. Still looking through the window, hearing high pitched screams coming from the paper thin woman. I knew this man would kill her. Suddenly, the loudest silence piercing in my hot ears. He's just glaring at me through the window as I stand astounded, afraid to move.

breanna perry 2nd

9/26/2015 03:45:21 am

Then all of a sudden, everything went quiet again. Rain poured softly on the antique cars that sat ominously on the streets. Not a soul nor a whisper could be heard until the eerie sound of a quiet engine crescendoed as it eased up the street. It paused like a killer before he commits his act. At that moment, the street lights flickered off as a new day began to emerge.

Demerion Cooks 4th period

9/26/2015 10:38:54 am

The town was in a depressed moment. Everyone sat quiet in there house, as the rain of bankruptcy started to begin.The sky begin to overcast a terrifying gloomy look, which started to scare the people left with no hope.Then the street lights was no longer lights they have became flickers.Oh no screaming from the hearts of the people not again!

Jaquan Adams 2nd

9/26/2015 04:15:39 am

As they ride pass their target, gunshots rung from the SUV. Gun shells hit the cold, rainy pavement as if it was a basketball. As the victim lies there lifeless, on lookers pull out there phones to record. The victim have no one to call on for help. As the police arrive at the scene, there is a great silence in the neighborhood.

Kobe bolden

9/26/2015 10:03:33 am

The police questioned every individual on the permises. Know one on the scene would corporate except this old wise old lady said she watched it happened.As she opens her mouth everyone in the crowd turned and faced her in disbelieve. The old lady told police a dark cheve tahoe drive slowly up the pathway then a young black came from the window and fire a fully automatic weapons.

Keylon Carter

9/26/2015 11:32:52 am

When the old lady describe the shooter , the police hops in there cars and speed race looking for the shooters . One police officer pulled up by a car that match the description . He called it in and flicked his lights on and start to chance the subspects . After weaving in and out of traffic , the police final stop the car . The officers stepped out their car and pointing their weapons at the subspects .

JeDarion Lyons 4th Period

9/26/2015 04:25:25 am

Dark and deserted as most people would see as a very creepy and scary place.But to others it's a place called home even despite of what people might make the neighborhood seem.Gun violence,mugging,and gang activity is what most people see but on a rainy and stormy night thats all that can be inferred about the scenery.With the ground as wet as baby oil on marble floors most people would look at the community as a gutter.However that's all you can conclude from the outside looking in.

SASHA SMITH 1ST

9/26/2015 05:01:07 am

In a whisper 911 I think he's killing her, I hear screaming, help come fast ,I think he's coming for me next; I'm in apartment 3B. This can't be happening my phone lost signal but before I could be his next victim I ran. The hallway resembles the ally tonight dark and cold. I saw his shadow on the off white walls. I felt a strong force pulling me be and like that I was out like a light.

Vivian Taylor 2nd

9/26/2015 06:18:18 am

His light was taken when that drunk driver took away his wife and kids; the memory burned in his clouded mind. He walked, feeling every rock underneath his worn sole. He didn't care about other people judging him, he judged himself plenty. He was the drunk driver. He was alone.

Aleczale Robertson period 3

9/26/2015 07:35:07 am

The light is out I am now seated at my window, gazing upon the city. There is such a calm in the heavens and upon the earth, I almost fear the world will never wake again ,What an impressive sight! a slumbering city. The beating of its mighty heart has ceased. Filled as it is with the power of man, it is now as helpless as an infant on its mother's breast.

Déyzya Hardeman P. 4.

9/26/2015 08:32:57 am

That infant is me, hidden behind a 6 ft. 1 inch man who wants nothing more than to be loved and accepted. I think about what I could've done to the despicable man that hurt the freckled woman last night, if I had enough power in me I would've used these huge fists to give a taste of his own medicine. Little does everyone know.. I don't have it in me and neither did she. I sigh as I notice that I'm overthinking once again, I get up, grab my keys to walk to the local store. As I lock my door, I feel and see someone approaching me. I slowly turn around and its the beautiful freckled woman, bandaged lip, with nothing but hope in her eyes.

Joshua Butler 3rd Period

9/26/2015 09:20:39 am

As the freckle women still in pain she still smile. She walks to the black car , but suddenly she see a man with a black coat and a frightening look on his face, soon as she see the man she goes behind the car and creep and creep to the other side of the car. She's steady looking at the man with a puzzled face, but soon as she turn her head the man stared in the window at her. She didn't know what to do but cry knowing that she was in as crossroads with the range man. She pushed off and ran behind the big black building's.

Da'Mishap Scott Period 2

9/26/2015 09:32:54 am

As she ran she stumbled in distress weeping and crying as quiet as possible so that the man couldn't hear her. She ran to the dark, cold, and lonely allie and looked seamlessly for a good spot to hide. She then saw a dumpster and hid behind it. The smell of old pasta and half eaten fish made her nose quiver. As the smell disgusted her she heard footsteps so she looked past the dumpster and there he was, staring at her with a cold look in his eyes.

Gabriela M 2pd

9/26/2015 09:48:21 am

The tall , buff intimating man , walked slowly towards her . He whispered I been looking for you . I can finally say I'm in peace with myself . I just wanted to let you know that your mom is looking for you . She replied " you scared me for my life man ."

Jesus

9/26/2015 10:10:15 am

The girl then walked home ashamed of her actions. She chuckled amused of the big deal made for nothing. Suddenly the man was behind her again this time determined to tell her something more deep something that could scar her . The man said come here as the girl ran the man pulled out a knife and chased her slowly no matter how fast she ran the man was constantly behind her at a steady pace. She tripped and scraped her face the man over her grined and stepped on her neck.

Jesus Duenas 2nd period

9/26/2015 10:11:41 am

I forgot to include the class period. There for... 2Nd period . Jesus Duenas.

Nigel Calhoun

9/26/2015 10:14:36 am

It was a a dark cloudy evening not a person in sight.The wind was blowing giving me goose bumps as I was walking.A man slowly gets out the car and try to grab me, I run as fast as a leopard to get away.Run down the road I fall in the alley with only little light.As I hide behind the dumpster he slowly walk I try to creep away and bam I'm caught !

arbriuna howard 3rd

9/26/2015 11:25:27 am

so I thought but all of a sudden I remembered I had my tazer in my pocket. I reached for it as fast cheetah ran. as I got to pulling it out my pocket I heard a familiar voice. but never the less it didn't stop me from coming forward. till the masked man revealed himself it was my brother. tall, dark breaded, buff, well fit guy so you see why I ran.

William Lacy

9/26/2015 10:30:34 am

In a dark, quite evening displayed from the clouds as the day of sacrifice approached. Only hours away from the dismantling panic of the people of Newgalaville as we picked to see who life was going to be at an permit finale. "Ding Ding Ding" As the bell ring with such anticipation the villagers crowd around the abnormally large hat to draw names. Horrified As I sit and wait on the name to be pulled looking around nervously I smile to let everybody see. Not knowing the name he was going to call was me.

Jerrol Jackson - 3rd period

9/26/2015 10:42:25 am

As I'm walking down the dark and raining Street , I see too cars standing in front of my house . Me approaching the cars too man get out with there hands in there jacket . They pulled out guns , POW! As I thought I was dead .. I woke up to just a scary dream .

Alexis Fowler 2nd period

9/26/2015 10:42:45 am

The soul of the man bled in agony as the night darken in brutality. The heart of the sky cried as he yelled to stop! As he gave his last breathe silence filled his apartment. But the flames of his infidelity will forever stain the floors , they once made love on . And the girl who once loved will mortally die with him.

DeMarcus Hurd P2

9/26/2015 10:44:22 am

As the anxiousness evaporated I sadly knew what time it was. Today was my day to be removed from the Earth. My family held me tight squeezing the life out of me before I was sacrificed. Only to find out that it was all a dream. Waking up in a cold sweat I thanked God for it being just a dream.

Fernando Moreira - 2nd period

9/26/2015 10:58:46 am

He begins to apply more pressure to her neck. When suddenly out of nowhere a loud, distinct voice of her boyfriend yelling leave her alone who begins to run towards them. The man gets off of her, picks up the knife that he dropped. As they ran towards each other the man stabs her boyfriend in the stomach.

Eric Coleman

9/26/2015 11:39:47 am

Outside, the dark sky, was yellow greenish had a fearful scene to it. Very quite outside no one around to make any noise because it was quiet and if anything was to happen no one will be able to hear.

Ravonte Woodson (4th period))

9/26/2015 11:47:37 am

On a dark quiet evening, and a sense of danger entered my heart as the skies began to tower over my head. My heart was in a marathon going down the alley. As I approached the corner I heard hard, meaningful steps. The sky appeared to get darker when footsteps got closer, sounding more fierce. Next thing I know i had a gun to my head and the bullet went through my head but I realized it was a thoughtful nightmare.

Darius Anderson

9/26/2015 11:51:38 am

As the sky was getting darker I was getting scared like shaggy from off scooby do it was cars in front of my house looking like a scary movie so I ranned to front of my house door hands shaking heart beating to open the door

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