March 21st, 2018

3/21/2018

A 9-word essay. Write one.

1. INCLUDE: First initial AND last name AND class period.

CAUTION!! Do NOT embarrass me, yourself, your class, the English department, the school or your parents with tasteless, meaningless comments. This is for a grade.

Due: Fri., March 23, 2018 11:59 p.m. CST

J.Fluette 6th link

3/21/2018 04:21:21 pm

The image looks like a dirty,abandoned nasty swamp.

K. Brown 1st hour

3/23/2018 07:32:52 pm

I completely see why you say this but the only thing I don't see is the swamp part.

j.jackson 6th

3/21/2018 04:49:55 pm

the image is a very old worn out tree.

victor ajuobi

3/21/2018 05:08:54 pm

A foggy area that is full of dead life

Juan O 6th prd

3/27/2018 07:16:36 pm

Were is it dead is just old

D.Molo 1st

3/21/2018 06:12:46 pm

A snapshot of a beautiful morning in a park.

J.barber 7th

3/21/2018 08:21:48 pm

I'm going to have to disagree with you on there. I don't see anything beautiful on that picture

D. Hearne 1st

3/23/2018 03:00:16 pm

You forgot a period for one. Secondly, it is okay that you don't find beauty in this picture, your definition of beauty probably isn't pervasive.

R. Garcia 1st

3/23/2018 11:21:30 pm

How can you be sure it's morning? The picture could have also been taken at dawn.

J.barber 7th

3/21/2018 08:20:08 pm

The conjuring type of feeling up under my skin.

K. Brown 1st hour

3/23/2018 07:40:33 pm

I get that similar feeling but for me it isn't conjuring fear, just a very strange feeling I don't get, interest, and strangely enough beauty.

B. Moreno 6thp

3/21/2018 08:48:45 pm

This picture is very sowerful and sad to watch.

R. Garcia 1st

3/23/2018 11:30:01 pm

I can definitely see where you're coming from. The darkness of the picture along with the dangling branches of the tree created a similar mood for me.

J. Jackson 7th

3/22/2018 03:54:19 am

To me the image appears demonic, gloomy and depressed.

I. Chancellor 1st/5th period

3/22/2018 08:02:10 am

The gloomy day at the beach,symbolizes being lifeless.

D. Hearne 1st

3/23/2018 02:56:50 pm

This is a good interpretation of the image. Many people find that dark things are negative but there are those who find comfort in it.

E. Hernandez 6th

3/22/2018 08:30:46 am

Your sadness might cause sadness to people around you.

S.Tillman 6th

3/23/2018 12:19:52 pm

I disagree i dont think this can effect people around u

D. Hearne 1st

3/23/2018 03:04:22 pm

You can't say definitively that it can't affect someone around you. When you bring bad energy it can be felt in the way you act and talk to someone and it could rub them the wrong way.

Arial Hodge link

3/27/2018 01:29:41 pm

I disagree also because it makes the situation worse

T. Shelton 1st

3/22/2018 09:57:16 am

No one can hear a desperate cry for help .

Z. James 1st

3/22/2018 10:11:08 am

Death lingered over the secluded lake consuming all happiness.

T.Tate1st

3/22/2018 04:36:40 pm

It's filmy in the weak light of the morning .

Adrian G 7th pd

3/22/2018 06:47:49 pm

I see a scene out of killer scary movie

Ty Smith 6th

3/23/2018 07:46:56 am

This image is an foggy place and it’s an unhappy picture.

Courtney Massingill 7th

3/23/2018 10:40:12 am

A Snapshot Of A Desperate Person Crying For Help.

tyson Thornton link

3/23/2018 11:26:10 am

this tree has seen meany lives pass and come

S.Tillman 6th

3/23/2018 12:27:57 pm

A Person comparing its feeling to the view that the tree has on the lake

Cvillanueva 1st

3/23/2018 02:01:35 pm

The humidity the tree feels on its bare skin.

N.Brown1st

3/23/2018 02:06:31 pm

Even in the depth of darkness there is light

Keishala B. 1st hour

3/23/2018 02:10:24 pm

Strangely beautiful with a side pinch of amazing mysterious.

H Aleman 1st period

3/23/2018 02:13:40 pm

'You are not obligated to think how they think.'

she never said it had to be about the picture

D. Hearne 1st

3/23/2018 02:55:00 pm

This is the way I feel on the inside.

D.Boyd 7th

3/23/2018 03:16:58 pm

A picture describing the feeling of a sad person.

j. chatman

3/28/2018 08:55:11 pm

I somewhat agree with Mr.Boyd ,to me this picture could represent something related to depression

D.Green

3/23/2018 05:20:51 pm

It depict the emotions of someones most inner self

Daijah Jackson 6th Period

3/23/2018 05:23:50 pm

when someone is feeling depressed or sad about something

J.Carire P-6

3/23/2018 05:28:14 pm

A person looking at the confusion of today's society.

I. Florence 1st

3/23/2018 06:44:41 pm

Your strength is immense when you're going through tribulations.

Jeremiah Solomon 1st

3/23/2018 08:19:43 pm

Remembering inspiration which once laid in a forgotten world.

B. Haynes 1st

3/23/2018 08:20:31 pm

Sometimes you must stand alone, weeping, but still strong.

T.Dawson 4th

3/23/2018 08:25:34 pm

"Let's play a game, just us" whispered the devil.

Summer Johnson 1st

3/23/2018 08:37:13 pm

Only the strong survive in dark and gloomy days.

F. Aleman 1st

3/23/2018 08:44:39 pm

There will always be beauty, even in darkest moments

J.Grant

3/23/2018 08:45:40 pm

Life drains you into a dark place without excape

A Chicas 7th

3/23/2018 09:09:10 pm

The lake were no one lives but haunted .ghost

B. Criss 4

3/23/2018 09:43:06 pm

Gorgeous scene hidden by the worlds habits and deceits

D.Moseley-4th pd

3/23/2018 09:49:47 pm

Hope for the best but prepare for the worst.

K. Allen 1st pd

3/23/2018 09:50:07 pm

Peace is a still tree with no wind blowing.

J. Maple 1st

3/23/2018 10:14:33 pm

The silhouette of a naked tree in the morning.

Cameron W.

3/23/2018 10:34:54 pm

The image is gloomy, abandoned and also very creepy.

Kaleb washington 6th

3/23/2018 10:54:24 pm

A dark sad nigth with a lonely tree alone

S. Moncivais 4th

3/23/2018 10:57:24 pm

Life always gets hard but still trying to survive.

J.Bonilla- 4th

3/23/2018 11:09:26 pm

Isolation and following your own path is the future.

R. Garcia 1st

3/23/2018 11:30:42 pm

The distortion of perception through the obstruction of vision.

Williams M7th

3/23/2018 11:57:33 pm

A old abandon town left with a sad tree

B.Brundidge 6th

3/24/2018 09:36:29 am

This is a nasty swamp that's abandon and old.

Jalen B.

3/24/2018 02:27:50 pm

A doom in shadows that awaits its next victim.

J.Andrews link

3/24/2018 08:50:47 pm

A swampy lake and a naked tree

C. McCowin 7th

3/27/2018 02:22:48 pm

A vintage tree and a dirty swamp or pond.

Juan O 6th prd

3/27/2018 07:21:04 pm

A Nice,Beautiful,Amazing, picture of an old tree

A.Moore link

3/27/2018 08:28:22 pm

A place where voodoo and horrifying things took place.

Sieng F.

3/28/2018 02:28:50 am

This picture shows gloom, fog, depression, loneliness, and horror.

Joseph Amos

5/18/2018 02:39:23 pm

I will clean the trash out my yard this week. Only throw trash on the thats bio degratable. Cut my grass and reuse it for cows and horses to eat . Try not to spit any gum on the concrete.

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