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4/15/2019

 
Watch the vid above in its entirety. Consider it, then comment intelligently, academically and with fidelity.

1. INCLUDE: First initial AND last name AND class period.

2. Respond in no more than 10 sentences and no less than five.


3. You MUST respond to at least TWO other posts from any student. Your replies cannot be identical comments on different posts and posting shallow comments such as "I agree" or "I disagree" will earn you a zero. Make sure your reply addresses the comment that you are responding to.
Be sure to--
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  • Use rhetorical devices and other grammar elements
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CAUTION!! Do NOT embarrass me, yourself, your class, the English department, the school or your parents with tasteless, meaningless comments. This is for a grade.

DISCLAIMER: If you do not respond AND comment on TWO others, you will not receive credit for this assignment. It's all or nothing.


Due: Fri., Apr. 19, 2019 11:59 p.m. CST​​​

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C.Swann 2nd
4/16/2019 11:54:03 pm

That is an amazing idea, but if that idea were to be utilized we would have to go to a school where we would never need our phones. The technology would have to be efficient enough to the point where the cell phone option wouldn’t be needed. The idea is phenomenal. Bringing students attention back on the teacher and getting students to interact with one another is what school is about. Having cell phones deteriorates the students focus. Implementing ideas like this will improve the students learning abilities tremendously.

Ant Breedlove 3rd
4/17/2019 09:45:44 am

I agree also with you, but now people cannot be trusted so we might need our phones. Especially in the school house.

S. Sanders- 1st Period
4/17/2019 10:33:02 pm

Students won’t be responsible or not. Student can’t be trusted, but phones are allowed in some classes or not. Should students carry phones at school or not. Can students lock phones up without the Yondr lock system? Makes one wonder right?

A.ross
4/19/2019 10:58:48 pm

That is true especially with this generation

M. Chavez 2nd pd.
4/18/2019 10:47:52 am

I agree, it's clearly working well so far, even students who opposed it at first, have changed their mind and resonated with the new policy.

C.Jones 6th
4/18/2019 08:59:25 pm

It's a good program, but that's only a few students, I doubt all the kids are doing it. It's not hard to hide a phone.

J. Gonzalez 2nd
4/19/2019 05:11:25 pm

I agree with you heavily. This is an amazing idea and the school would have to provide computers to those classes that need technology. Overall this is a tremendous idea to get kids to interact with one another

A.ross
4/19/2019 11:00:24 pm

True but sometimes most kids and teens are not social and shy

Z. Crawford
4/19/2019 06:48:06 pm

There would have to be less technology use overall

T.Harris 6th period
4/19/2019 11:53:38 pm

this is right we should have no need for phones at school it’s just an distraction.

Z. James 8th
4/17/2019 08:06:32 am

The idea is innovative and very creative. However, the idea would not resonate with me. Due to the ever changing events that occur at Lancaster High School, my phone helps me get in touch with my mom in a efficient way. Depriving me of my cell phone, stops me from attending meetings, events , and other beneficial opportunities. This initiative is great for the delinquents, however it hurts the scholars.

Ant Breedlove 3rd
4/17/2019 09:43:55 am

I definitely agree given the circumstances at this school we would need our phones

S. Pirzada 6th
4/17/2019 05:07:13 pm

It should be used responsibly, especially those who are quite active.

C. Hamilton
4/17/2019 09:53:02 pm

I agree because our cell phones gives us that alerts we need about what’s going on around the school. Like coaches us Twitter or group chats to give out information about what’s going on in their organization. As well as college center giving information about different events around the school or the district .

J. Griffith 2nd
4/19/2019 05:19:02 pm

I agree because using our phones for group chats keeps us in the loop on what is happening at school.

D.Gadson 6th
4/18/2019 07:55:14 am

That is true we get most announcements and information on our phones. Believe or not our phones help us be organized and work faster.

M.Chavez 2nd pd
4/18/2019 10:46:17 am

I agree, one of the main reasons our parents give us cell phones at such a young age, is to get in touch with them, especially in case of emergencies.

J. Maple 8th
4/19/2019 08:55:49 pm

I agree, although I feel that scholars could benefit from the idea as well. Face to face interaction is very important, but the drawbacks are numerous.

K. Allen 8th pd
4/19/2019 09:58:34 pm

I totally agree with you, phones are useful in today’s society. It’s very helpful .

T.Falls 6th
4/19/2019 10:43:52 pm

You are so right cell phones are the easiest way to communicate with a group of people without distracting the whole school.

T. Jones 2nd
4/19/2019 11:15:09 pm

I’m with you. Although phones may distract us, it has many benefits of having your device on you.

T.Harris 6th period
4/19/2019 11:55:06 pm

Our phones help us in ways but also distracting us from the things in front of our face.

Ant Breedlove 3rd
4/17/2019 09:40:06 am

Cool idea or whatever but we won’t be able to go to school and not have our phones. Unless schools have technology to cause us to think our phone won’t be needed. It’s going to be hard bringing students attention back on the teachers. Cell phones are killing students brains. Enforcing ideas would eventually pay off in the meantime.

C. Hamilton 5th
4/17/2019 09:51:07 pm

I agree because the technology in our school is so bad that must if the times we have to use our phones instead of the laptop . For numerous reasons.

Marqueshia Richardson
4/18/2019 08:45:00 am

I just hope this school could be able to follow through with a procedure like that. Just getting the kids into a mindset of not wanting to ruin our brains with technology and social media. Most of the time that is what is happening.

J. Griffith 2nd
4/19/2019 08:58:33 pm

Most of the assignments that are assigned, require a laptop for better work ethics. Half the time, the laptops take a while to load which is why we use phones for that reason.

M. Mason 1st
4/18/2019 07:28:15 pm

I agree and how does the school expect to pay to get new technology.

M. Hollywood 2nd
4/19/2019 08:59:45 pm

The computers at the school are so slow we are nearly forced to use our phones! Better technology would have to be implemented for this to work.

T. Jones 2nd
4/19/2019 11:17:44 pm

I agree. The phones work better than the computers. I just suggest maybe uninstalling social media apps.

S. Pirzada 6th
4/17/2019 05:03:27 pm

It's a cute and nifty product, not only an education is a learning environment it includes a place to interact. Student can focus more. With yonder these students seem to have more etiquette and freedom than just being prone to their phones. Mines was once confiscated for unbearable time when I really need it, like having no personal access though it was permitted to use to in class. Also I felt empty not occupying myself and watching my peers on their phones.

S. Sanders - 1st Period
4/17/2019 10:29:43 pm

Right a nifty idea, but it appears it costs to put the phone up on lock. Is it worth it when one can be responsible. It’s either we need our phones for school work or we do not. A person can learn to do without the phone which is how schools started deciding to confiscate phones charging the student before retrieving.

Marqueshia Richardson
4/18/2019 08:43:34 am

Like they said on the video said some of the students had extra phones. That is something this school would most likely do. But I feel like until some of them gain the mentality to want to step into the idea then that is when it will actually work. Because you never know how many phone the kids have now and days they probably have 12 phones in all for backup.

A. Green 3
4/18/2019 10:57:30 am

That’s true and I totally agree. It is giving them more than just the ability to be obsessed with their phone usage. Also that is true for the students that don’t have their own cellular devices.

C. Hamilton 5th
4/17/2019 09:49:06 pm

I feel like it’s a good product and idea to use . But in this world nowadays and everything that’s happened or happening , we’re gonna need our phones to get in contact with the people in case of emergency . Also, we will need better technology at the school so we wouldn’t have to use our phones . Like now most of the time we have to use our phone because of how slow the laptops turns on , the bad connection in the laptop , etc . I think they would use this as a way for kids who get caught multiple times on their phones instead of making them pay that $15. Give them a pouch to put in their phones and when their leaving they can get it unlocked .

A. Green 3
4/18/2019 10:56:06 am

I feel like it’s a good idea overall as well. But just like you brought up it’s an added expense to students. And many students already live off the bare minimum and adding an expense that the school isn’t covering could be detrimental.

M. Hollywood 2nd
4/19/2019 09:00:43 pm

Yes, things can change at a moments notice. Without access to our phones how will we be able to spread information.

K. Allen 8th pd
4/19/2019 10:33:14 pm

I agree with you , the product should be a way of punishing those that over step boundaries instead of the entire student body.

Z. James 8th
4/19/2019 11:44:13 pm

Having technology substitutes helps the student from getting on their phone.

S. Sanders- 1st Period
4/17/2019 10:24:54 pm

Yondr is a smart proposition and it serves a great purpose, but the cost for it is about the cost for a student to purchase to get phone back when taken up by a school representative. It help the students in the video focus and communicate by properly taking out time with one another talking to one another. This is needed cause in school, at jobs, at church, even at restaurants you see everyone’s head looking downward at the phone not talking to each other. Increased cellphone usage hinders one’s critical thinking ability, causing not to concentrate as consistent, and makes one miss out on socialization. You would think why not keep phones in the locker locked up, but no; use a device to help you learn to complete put your phone up. I was amazed to hear this is pushed by singers at concerts etc. I’m impressed and proud of the founder for such a creative idea for business.

J. Maple 8th
4/19/2019 09:00:33 pm

I think the idea is great, but it's not practical. Cell phones have become a very useful tool in our society, and it's dangerous to have a large group of people together with no way to contact who they need to.

R.Hannon 6th
4/19/2019 11:32:54 pm

But is it really dangerous not to communicate to each other? I mean think about it , back then they didn’t have phones. So why is it hard know to find a way to speak or communicate. Right because, everyone is used to a hand held device.

M. Cain 2nd
4/19/2019 11:27:14 pm

I agree we often miss out on important moments and memories because we’re too focused on our phones.

Marqueshia Richardson
4/18/2019 08:40:34 am

The yonder idea is actually quite smart. Just think about within that time period that a student has their phone in a yonder pouch but within that same time period a person could have been in the midst of cyber bullying. This idea is actually saving mostly teens cause you see more teens on their phones more than anyone else and honestly I feel like phones do have a huge negative impact at times and even I admit that I'm on my phone way to much so if we had this idea in this school I would go for it.

K. Gomez 6th
4/19/2019 11:03:04 pm

I agree the idea and concept is really good and I can also admit that I’m on my phone way too often.

R.Hannon 6th
4/19/2019 11:35:08 pm

Well first you definitely didn’t read because your whole name is typed. But , I’m not here to criticize. And what will make you give your phone in , if your always on it? I know it’s not that easy.

M. Chavez 2nd pd.
4/18/2019 10:37:33 am

The idea of locking up student cell phones is a good idea, but it would definitely take some time to get used to. There is no lie that we rely so much on phones and they cause great distractions especially in class. 'Yonder', seems likes a good way to get students to interact more, and pay attention, rather than have their face stuck to a screen for a majority of the day. I do support the idea of students actually learning and engaging with the things being taught to them. Most students use their phone to cheat and take pictures of the assignments so they can, "look at it later." In reality they forget, and it never crosses their mind after that,

M. Mason 1st
4/18/2019 07:25:59 pm

I agree, and how would students ever learn if they use their phone to look up answers? It’s like saying what’s the point of tutoring.

Keiyana E 3rd
4/19/2019 07:22:39 am

Most student do take pictures to cheat and some actually do take pictures to get more knowledge. One reason students use their cell phones to cheat is because they don’t understand their teacher or they’re just lazy.

D.Gadson 6th
4/19/2019 12:03:17 pm

When it comes to taking pictures of the work on our phone some students can actually go home and study what’s on the pictures. However you are right about most students just taking a picture of it and never look at it again.

T.Falls 6th
4/19/2019 10:52:11 pm

We do rely on are cell phones a lot for the good and the bad.Just because you take are phones and put them in a bag don’t mean we won’t find a way around it.

M Martinez 3rd
4/19/2019 10:52:19 pm

This is a good idea like you said i agree with you on it. I too think we need to get used to it at the of the day.

Z. James 8th
4/19/2019 11:45:19 pm

Students are very caught up in their social lives and cell phones.

A. Green 3
4/18/2019 10:53:49 am

I agree with this idea because it would help a lot of students stay focused during the day. But I also disagree because most of the work we get is done on our cellular devices. And only speaking for my school Lancaster’s computers are insufficient to use everyday due to shorts and just overall not working. So it would be efficient in some aspects but also wouldn’t work. Plus the students would have to be on board with the idea and many wouldn’t.

I Jones 6th Period
4/19/2019 09:50:35 am

I totally agree. Before our school starts locking our phones up they need to get their technology in check because LHS had horrible computers that barely work or are very slow . The only good computers we have are the mac computers on B wing and that’s certainly not enough for every student in that school .

M Martinez 3rd
4/19/2019 10:55:01 pm

Technology benefits us like you said but it also makes us depend on it. The technology at our school is terrible like you said.

J. Griffith 2nd
4/18/2019 04:49:47 pm

I would most likely agree with this concept if the school had enhanced technology. If they could make it so we can keep up with important dates and tasks, it could be seen as effective. In which case, our phones help to stay in touch with friends and family. Most may see their phone as being an important asset and take it with them everywhere they go.

I. Chancellor 8th period
4/19/2019 07:48:44 pm

That is so true, because if the internet there is subpar, then taking away their phones is stupid. In agreement, if they do show important dates or tasks, then it would be a great idea to lock up the phones. With all honesty, that makes the idea kind of bad, because you will be out of touch of family members, if something bad happened. To be honest, that ideology has to change. To me, this is a good idea and a bad idea at the same time.

M. Hollywood 2nd
4/18/2019 06:11:35 pm

This is very innovative! The idea to separate teens from their phone would be a hard task but once it’s done I think it would benefit the students greatly. This program should be slowly implemented into schools because completely forcing it will be over bearing. Due to the constant change of events phones should only be taken during instructional time. However, during lunch or passing period phones should be returned. In addition, there is no way to completely guarantee that students will be honestly using the system and they could be sneaking extra devices in to stay “ in touch”. Overall, with a few adjustments to how it is introduced I believe it could be a great investment to get more students engaged in the learning.

M. Mason 1st
4/18/2019 07:24:16 pm

This is a great idea no doubt. It encourages students to want to learn more and pass their classes. However, it keeps us disconnected from our family members. If something happened at school or we need something we cannot contact our parents. The idea of the pouch should be used throughout all schools, but most students aren’t willing to give up their phones without a fight. Aside from that I believe this product will help so many students who are struggling in certain classes.

Keiyana E 3rd
4/19/2019 07:17:47 am

That’s true. Not having our phones at school is a little risky because of all the school shootings going on. Phones are how we get ahold of our family in case of an emergency.

L. Delley
4/21/2019 09:59:52 pm

I agree, nowadays, instances like school shootings are happening and it is important
to have some type of technology on hand to get in contact with someone.

I Jones 6th Period
4/19/2019 09:48:00 am

Although that is a very true statement, there’s always a way around that. For example if your parents needs to get in contact with you, she could always call the school and ask to speak to you . There’s a way around everything .

C.Jones 6th
4/18/2019 08:21:41 pm

I could see that happening at a private school or maybe even public schools in the future, probably even elementary to highschool. Good thing I'm out this boy.

Keiyana E 3rd
4/19/2019 07:14:46 am

The video represents the first step in changing how students learn at school. Cell phones are a distraction and when you eliminate them you pay more attention. Taking up phones can be irritating but at the end of the day it’s to benefit us.

S. Lara 6th period
4/19/2019 02:34:18 pm

I agree with you, phones are the main distraction and eliminating them will be beneficial in many ways. It will definitely irritate students, however teachers will be thrilled without having to keep repeating themselves when telling students to put them away.

I Jones 6th period
4/19/2019 09:45:39 am

After watching the video and seeing how much of an improve that school had once they started locking the students phones up is great and innovative. This would be perfect for our school because phones are a HUGE problem in LHS; and without them i believe out grades will go up, test scores will improve and even our schools learning environment will become more efficient and productive. Personally i am all for the idea, but of course others that go to LHS won’t like it at all. They LIVE on their phones and don’t realize there’s a whole world to engage in outside of that phone . This product will help students stay focused instead of getting distracted every 3 minutes with their phones .

H Aleman 8th period
4/19/2019 11:14:44 am

The idea is very innovative. Upon first glance, the idea is great, that is, until you realize that the product won't resonate well with the trends and customs in our current society. Times are definitely changing, and this can best be seen through the emergence of new, advanced technology. If we were to use this product, we would need to attend a school that does not require that we use our phones. This, however, is very rare. We rely on technology so much in school and in the world because of how easy and convenient it makes it to complete tasks. we also use our phones for comfort, communication and safety. I do agree that the use of electronics in school should be limited in some ways, but that doesn't mean it should be completely prohibited. How inconvenient would it be if we didn't have access to our phones during school?

K.Gomez 6th
4/19/2019 10:55:31 pm

I agree that we rely on technology a lot and that is why we are provided with laptops and chrome books, so a phone isn’t really a necessary tool.

S. Pirzada 6th
4/19/2019 11:35:04 pm

At our school, phones are at reach than reserved computers students. There's also teacher who prohibits phones in classrooms saying we have materials like books, notes and calculators. Also students have necessary private concerns and emergencies. No matter how useful Yonder is I disbelieve it'll come around long, nor that every school will find this affordable.

H Aleman
4/19/2019 11:16:56 am

Despite the fact that I do not agree with prohibiting the use of phones in schools, I do have to admire the creativity in the purpose of this product. It is a great way to train students to focus on learning during school.

D.Gadson 6th
4/19/2019 12:39:37 pm

The idea of locking up students phones can benefit the students and school academic status. Although it will be hard to get every student to start following the rules and turning in their phone because we are stuck to them. Sometimes there might be a time where students use their phone if the computers are down. So there are some pros and cons to letting this idea in schools and some to think about. Safety should be considered as well with taking away phones all day.

S. Lara 6th period
4/19/2019 02:38:46 pm

There is many cons along with the pros which means if schools do plan to enforce a policy like this they must think about situations in which a student may need their phone for a family emergency or school work as well. This idea benefits the school in many ways however doesn’t benefit the students as much besides allowing them to retain more information.

K . Phillips 6th
4/19/2019 10:07:39 pm

Taking up phones would allow so much room for the kids to see opportunities to grow in other aspects in life

A crow 5th period
4/19/2019 01:27:30 pm

I think it would be a great idea to take up students phones during school hours because our phones distract us in alot of ways. Taking phones up will help us focus on our classwork more.

M Taylor 1st period
4/19/2019 11:13:33 pm

That’s partially true but no completely cell phones aren’t always the distraction

L. Delley
4/21/2019 09:57:45 pm

I agree, cell phones aren’t always distractions. They can help us in ways too.

S. Lara 6th period
4/19/2019 02:30:52 pm

I believe this is a good idea however many students would be against it. Phones are primarily used for cheating which will make it more difficult for them to corporate with this idea. Overall this is a good idea which will help students interact face to face and obtain more information in class without any distractions.

J. Gonzalez 2nd
4/19/2019 05:19:37 pm

Exactly, if students don't have their phones then it forces them to actually learn and study because they know there's no way they're going to be able to cheat.

N. Medina 6th
4/19/2019 09:13:53 pm

Imagine our scores tho, students would actually comprehend the subject and aim for better grades knowing they have no way of cheating to save them.

M. Cain 2nd
4/19/2019 11:24:23 pm

I agree, without phones in the class room how could you not pay attention. This would allow students to actually comprehend what is being taught in their classrooms.

J. Gonzalez 2nd
4/19/2019 05:17:57 pm

I believe this is a great idea. It promotes students to provide their full undivided attention to the teachers and forces the students to interact more with one another. And it's not like the school is holding the phones themselves throughout the whole day. The students are still able to hold the phones while they're in the pouches.

Z. Crawford
4/19/2019 07:14:51 pm

Students grades will improve because they will have no choice but to interact and learn

I. Chancellor 8th period
4/19/2019 07:41:19 pm

In agreement, this is a great idea to have at a school. To be honest, that would create a smart and loving environment. That is true, that the staff does not hold their phones all day. With all honesty, that will teach them not to pick up their phones, when something alerts them, because it is in the pouch. However, this comes with drawbacks, because in case of an emergency, they will not be able to call the police or ambulance.

Z. Crawford
4/19/2019 07:11:53 pm

This idea has it's pros and cons. One con is what if you need immediate access to your parents in case of an emergency. Of course the pros outweighs the cons, which makes this idea amazing in producing student connection. Helps keep kids focused and interact more in class. Being less connected with the world can cause less stress on you. You won't be so worried about the lasted things and keeping up with everyone else.

D. Tonche 8th pd
4/19/2019 09:50:23 pm

I usually oppose those who overbearingly say that technology is bad for us but one thing that I can agree with them is that social media does affect your self-image and affects your anxiety.

Z. Crawford 6thpd
4/19/2019 07:13:56 pm

This idea has it's pros and cons. One con is what if you need immediate access to your parents in case of an emergency. Of course the pros outweighs the cons, which makes this idea amazing in producing student connection. Helps keep kids focused and interact more in class. Being less connected with the world can cause less stress on you. You won't be so worried about the lasted things and keeping up with everyone else.

K.phillips 6th
4/19/2019 10:06:16 pm

if they need to call a parents or guardian they can use the school phone 🤷🏽‍♀️.

A crow 5th period
4/19/2019 10:35:20 pm

If something was wrong the school would contact the parents immediately. I believe that during school hours students should only be focused on their work and grades. So if anything is keeping them from learning it needs to be eliminated.

M Taylor 1st period
4/19/2019 11:12:10 pm

the product is iffy to me.. and how and why it’s being used

I. Chancellor 8th period
4/19/2019 07:34:33 pm

I have mixed emotions on whether we should lock our phones or not. With all honesty, this was a great idea to get student participation, but it has its drawbacks. To be honest, it is great to see students interacting with the lesson and with people, because it brings down social anxiety and people being left out. However, in case of a emergency, this would be a terrible idea, because no one would able to call the police or the ambulance. To me, this would be a great thing to be to Lancaster High School.

N. Medina 6th
4/19/2019 09:11:59 pm

Agreed, Lancaster could use something like this and replace our computers for something better that we could use instead.

Jniquea jackson2
4/19/2019 10:50:59 pm

I believe there is a lot that can be improved in Lancaster!! If taking away the phones means there need to be regulations on teachers using there phone too . And the embers and entertainment inside the class room.

D. Tonche 8th pd
4/19/2019 09:47:50 pm

I am glad to see that these students are more willing to participate in their lessons, however, i did not think about how they contact help if they were in a dangerous situation like a school shooting.

Jniquea jackson2
4/19/2019 10:49:34 pm

I also agree with this in a emergency situation how will all the student be able to receive there phones and contact parents. Phones are a positive and negative things in today time.

K. Brown 8th hour
4/19/2019 11:12:56 pm

Honestly, that is a huge concern that I have for the idea of locking down phones. I hate the thought of if there happened to be an emergency, a student would not be able to call for help. And while it can be argued that a teacher could do it instead, I just see the chances of a student falling out or being injured without adults around and another student having to either shout helplessly or run and leave the other student alone to find help. This may not be a common occurrence, but it is still a plausible danger.

J. Maple 8th
4/19/2019 08:51:56 pm

I think this is a great idea and would probably be very effective in creating more face to face interaction. However, cell phones are not only beneficial, but necessary. They allow us to network with people around the world, check for important updates and find information quickly. In case of an emergency, it would allow us to contact help if we needed to. The Yonder pouch could be incredibly useful, but the cell phone is a tool that has been integrated into our society.

B. Haynes 8th
4/19/2019 11:22:22 pm

I don’t think it would be an easy adjustment, seeing as how technology has become so ingrained in our society. However, I feel that with certain rules to fit a social setting, the Yonder pouch could be implemented in a more effective way.

N. Medina 6th
4/19/2019 09:09:22 pm

I really like this idea. I like having those experiences where it’s just you and your friends enjoying moments with no technology. This would be great for Lancaster considering how much phones is an issue at our school. It can be so effective, our scores would become better, students become more social, and get in touch with themselves more. As much as I like the idea I also can agreed with the fact that we indeed also need our little handy dandy devices. In today’s society there is so much going on that we need to be in touch with others and quickly.

E Salas 6th
4/19/2019 11:05:03 pm

Conversations without phones are the best. Phones really dull things out and makes people unappealing.

D. Hearne 8th
4/21/2019 05:50:46 pm

It’s probably just the people you talk to. I have great conversations with the people I talk to, phone in hand.

A.Crow 3rd pd
4/21/2019 08:53:13 pm

I agree if this rule applied to Lancaster our test scores would be higher. This rule would force us to actually pay attention and not be on social media.

D. Tonche 8th pd
4/19/2019 09:44:15 pm

When i first began reading the topic for this discussion for this week's Mixed Ink I immediately opposed it. I always felt that the older generation exaggerated the our generation's usage of technology. However, I began reflecting my actions and the actions of others to come to the conclusion that we do use our phones in an alarming rate. Whether it is in the middle of the hallway, during lunch, or in the classroom we are always connected to our phones. Nonetheless, this school is going to the extent of revoking their students rights to their property seemed ludicrous to me. But when I saw the students playing cards and playing outside that made me so happy because it reminded me of my childhood.

M. Sanchez 6thpd.
4/19/2019 11:35:19 pm

I also opposed it because I think of how much I’m on my phone in the classes where I don’t do anything. If this was done in our school I probably would get a lot of work done in that specific class and learn things I might not learn in class. I do sometimes do my work in that class but if I was to do it everyday I wouldn’t have to procrastinate or stress because I waited til the last minute.

K. Phillips 6th
4/19/2019 10:04:45 pm

I’m feel two sided about this because technology is a everyday life thing but also this idea is so smart especially for at school because kids don’t interact with each other like we used to in elementary. At lunch EVERYONE is hooked to a phone . I feel like tho it depends on how you using the phone cause not everyone use it just for social media . People life really on there phones lol .

E. Salas 6th
4/19/2019 11:02:11 pm

Phones really drain the social aspect of school, taking that back would make school so much more fun. Pretty great idea that should be implemented definitely in core classes.

K. Allen 8th pd
4/19/2019 10:36:31 pm

The product is a great idea but it’s not logical. For a school to lockdown a students phone they would have to make sure they have electronics that won’t glitch nor crash , which is impossible. You would also have to deal with nagging parents that’s trying to get in contact with their child.

D. Hearne 8th
4/21/2019 05:41:53 pm

I’m sure the school will inform the parents of this new addition.

M Martinez 3rd
4/19/2019 10:43:12 pm

This is a good idea to some extend that we need to get used to our phones being taken up. I believe we do rely so much on a little screen. Although we benefit from this technology it does mess us up in some way. We would need time to get used to it instead of relying so much on our phones. Would be good to use this device on somedays.

Jniquea jackson 2
4/19/2019 10:48:13 pm

Honestly I do like the idea of the yonder but to a certain extent . Technology is a something new to this generation and the technology help us with our everyday life. I can stay the use of technology should be decreased in the class room . But I also agree with it the phones are taken the energy and vibe in the class room should be different. No child wants to sit in a classroom where it is boring !!

M Taylor 1st period
4/19/2019 11:09:50 pm

not all teachers or schools are not the same.. boring and fun maybe defined differently

F. Aleman 8th
4/19/2019 11:19:05 pm

The problem with students is that they find things in the classroom "boring". What you find boring could be extremely important in the next few years. Yes technology helps us make tasks easier, but we rely on technology way more than necessary. Because we find the class boring we want to be on our phones, or we don't feel like doing a homework assignment , we just look up the answers.

K.Gomez 6th
4/19/2019 10:50:34 pm

I understand message they are giving and I agree. Phones are really distracting, not just in school but in general. I like the concept and idea of the pouch but it seems a little extra. Like Ms. Cooper, my Government teacher, has this box where we put our phones, which essentially does the same thing as the little pouch thing ( I forgot the name of the product). And while I agree with everything I don’t know if I would be willing to do it. Maybe if it was implemented during each class I would because I NEED to listen to music during the passing period it’s the only thing that keeps me sane.

K. Brown 8th
4/19/2019 11:08:36 pm

I somewhat feel the same way as well when it comes to the passing period. When I walk without my music I feel somewhat empty and weird. I then start focusing too heavily on the fact that I can hear all these noises and for some reason it just makes me tired.

J. Perez 6th
4/19/2019 11:48:22 pm

Thank you for being so honest. Most would agree with the video but would never comply. It is something we need but i doubt anyone would ever really do it. Sure it'll help build human connections and reduce bullying, social anxiety, and stress but we've become too invested into technology to let it go. Though im pretty sure there is a middle ground that both sides can agree upon.

A.ross
4/19/2019 10:57:34 pm

I think its a great idea but what if something bad happens and the students dont have they phones on them to contact their parents. But i dont think social media is the only cause bullying happens in school too not just online and i think teachers and staff ignores that fact

F.Aleman 8th
4/19/2019 11:29:50 pm

I think there's really one con of locking up phones and thats for emergency's. I think that schools can figure away to get that situated

J. Perez 6th
4/19/2019 11:40:49 pm

Yeah bullying still happens in schools but its way easier to do it via a phone or laptop. Teachers wouldnt be aware of it regarless theres a better chance of getting caught in the act of physically bullying someone than through a phone. Messages can get deleted, faked, etc. Keeping that little device out of their grasp for a couple hours would help them with interacting and building better relationships with others. Not to mention they'll have more empathy for others. Whether they actually follow through with the process is up to them though.

G. Musa 6th period
4/23/2019 06:34:15 pm

I agree and either way it goes there's always a good and bad side to a thing nothing is consequence free. Bullying can happen over the phone and escalate at school so the best thing is to limit cell phone use not justing it all together.

K. Brown 8th hour
4/19/2019 10:58:42 pm

As much as I hate to admit it and I really wish to deny it, I think in many ways this is a good idea. Yes, it is semi-sad that we have to LOCK phones away to ensure that students won't use them and yes phones are a major distraction (I myself fall victim to using it during lecture time as well). I feel like there would be slight set backs in communication and work, seeing as much of our work is done digitally now, but I honestly feel like there could be some jumps forward considering we are forced away from our phones. I myself would be less inclined to get distracted by online comics and music as a replacement for free time to do other work and gather myself. I also know that I would be more willing to focus seeing as I know that I really have no choice but to.

B. Haynes
4/19/2019 11:18:24 pm

I agree. When my phone was broken and I didn’t have it around to distract me, I was much more productive with my work. The setbacks were a hard challenge—communication, online work, etc.—but it was an interesting experience.

R. Garcia
4/20/2019 12:00:44 am

I agree, i have also been guilty of using my phone during instruction time, and what i have noticed is that my phone has become an enabler for my procrastination which is why i think yondr is such a good idea to ensure students remain focused.

E. Salas 6th
4/19/2019 11:00:16 pm

Back in the days school used to have more interaction and conversation happening between students and teachers. Technology in the classroom lets us have another world at the tip of our fingers that always seems to be more interesting than the lesson. Taking the interest out of the phones and into the classroom would help students tremendously. Kids will begin talking to each other again and paying attention in class because thats all they really have to do. I think school would be a lot better if something like this were in place.

C. San Roman 2nd
4/19/2019 11:28:04 pm

I also agree with your notion that our school would be better if we had something like this, but I am sure most of the students would go ballistic at the first mention of something like this.

M. Sanchez 6thpd.
4/19/2019 11:32:26 pm

School has changed tremendously and back then they probably learned more then the average kid learns now. If we were to get rid of phones we could all learn to depend on our minds and not our phones or google. It would take some getting used to but so does a lot of other things that we have to go through as teenagers so why not.

F. Aleman 8th
4/19/2019 11:06:44 pm

Many Teenagers today have a cell phone addiction. Cell phone addiction takes up most of people attention. Teens’ intense focus on cell phones distracts them and they are not present in their everyday life.Grades at school can drop and participation in extracurricular activities can diminish. I think it is a good idea for schools to take up phones are make sure students are not using their phones. It allows students to pay attention in class and focus on better things.

K. Banks 6th
4/19/2019 11:47:07 pm

Students’ focus on their cell phones does impact their use to learn.

N.Brown8th
4/19/2019 11:59:56 pm

i agree that taking the phones will benefit the students and help them improve in class.The students will benefit in communication they will no longer lack attention.

A.Crow 3rd pd
4/21/2019 08:50:10 pm

I agree and disagree with your statement. Yes taking phone will make some students pay attention but then you still have the students that just refuse to learn and they cause all types of disruptions.

M Taylor 1st period
4/19/2019 11:08:08 pm

Okay first uno been it and always will be it
But i believe that’s a little too far for some schools
Like yea for the school shown on the video maybe that would be best for them because they may not use a lot of technology and teachers actually are present to teach and or teach atall at that but from the start to the end maybe slightly over doing it but the concept is understandable may work for some districts but not all.. you can’t always eliminate the problem by locking it away

C. San Roman 2nd
4/19/2019 11:22:30 pm

The way they implemented the product was extreme to me. I believe they should give the phones back to the students at the end of each period

J. Perez 6th
4/19/2019 11:11:40 pm

The affect these bags have is exactly what we need in this day and age. However, because we've depended so heavily on electronics people have become addicted to their phones...literally...some cant eat, sleep or even function without having their phone. Having gone so long with their phones by their side and then taking them away is a drastic change for many. Since its something they cant live without they'll find loops, ways to get away with having their phone at their side much like what the video showed. Students will give teachers a decoy in order to slide by. If students are still capable of finding a way around the system then there's no point in investing.

G. Musa 6th period
4/23/2019 06:31:33 pm

We can't really judge because of an outside view we have, addicted is a bit of a push on word. It's more like a connection we find freedom in our technology in order to interact with others.

B. Haynes 8th
4/19/2019 11:16:19 pm

I can see both sides of the argument. Phones do take away from being present and attentive, but they can also be effective with communication and the technology-infused learning we have. For me, I know that not having a phone would lead to me to being more productive—I wouldn’t have Twitter or music to distract me. Though, my only issue would be the communication aspect, as I need to stay in contact with family members throughout the day. If we are focusing on the social and educational aspect of it during school hours, then I agree. The idea is very innovative and I think it would be very effective. However, I do think that technology should still be utilized during school, if not in the form of a phone.

N.Brown8th
4/19/2019 11:56:28 pm

I agree that if we are just viewing the school aspect of the situation then that would be a postive change for students and teachers.More students will be interactive with their peers.

C.San Roman 2nd
4/19/2019 11:19:50 pm

There have been many study cases surrounding cell phone usage during class, and the results of those experiments always conclude with that students who use a cell phone during class will have a lower grade than those who don't. I believe by restricting students from accessing their cell phone during class period through the implementation of yondr, the problem be will be almost completely solved.

M. Cain 2nd
4/19/2019 11:21:46 pm

In elementary school I can definitely say my relationships with people at my school we’re stronger because all we could do was talk to each other. Where as now in high school you don’t need to talk or interact with other people to be entertained. I think this is a great idea for schools to try, although it wouldn’t immediately be embraced by the students. But in the long run I think they would understand the benefits. I personally would be against this only because I depend on my phone to get my through awkward times or when I don’t know anybody in the room. But at the same time I’m further proving why locking up phones should would be beneficial.

R.Hannon 6Th pd
4/19/2019 11:25:53 pm

What a great innovative creation. It’s not even all about taking phones for the purpose of bullying or not paying attention. But, The improvement of young teens engaging can make a huge impact on teens stepping out of their comfort zones. Also, having them actually learn and interact with the teacher much more and it makes the students think instead of running to their best friend google. It has its advantages and disadvantages because as said in the video, students can have a second phone. Now , what good is that. But, overall it can work for some or many schools.

C.Williams 6th prd
4/27/2019 07:37:48 pm

Taking away phones during school would most definitely bring people closer and allow students to have relationships with their classmates.

T. Jones 2nd
4/19/2019 11:26:07 pm

This idea is definitely different and will cause for major adjustments. The idea of knowing we will not have our phones on us is disturbing. There has to be other ways to limit our social media use. Phones are a heavily used is today’s era. We also need more interactions without phones So the pouch would help us benefit that way.

T.Falls 6th
4/20/2019 05:38:35 am

*Disclaimer I already know this is late but I had to sneak in my mama room to use my phone because I am in trouble and I had to wait till she was sleep sleep.* I love the idea of the bag because it would teach us that there are more resources then just are phones. Our cell phones will definitely be the death of us because we depend on them to do almost everything especially at school. Most kids don’t even know how to use a dictionary anymore because they don’t have to when they have a phone. I also feel as if this strategy would not work for all schools because kids will always find a way to have technology on them.Lastly we are living in the technology era where most assignments given require some sort of technology to do. It just seems so unrealistic to have a school with no cell phones even though they do more harm then good.

M. Sanchez 6th pd.
4/19/2019 11:29:36 pm

I believe that this is very innovative and a great idea, it has already showed tremendous improvement not only in the learning environment but also in public events. It would be beneficial if all schools were to able to use this specific technique to help improve the learning, maybe students wouldn’t be lacking as much as they currently are. Not only would it improve learning but social skills would be put to use and people wouldn’t be able to hide behind a screen. Yes, the schools would need updated technology so this transition could take place but if it’s going to benefit both students and teachers why not take that extra step to do so.

K. Banks 6th
4/19/2019 11:42:31 pm

This idea will improve social skills and learning.

K. Banks 6th
4/19/2019 11:41:15 pm

This idea is more beneficial than harmful. Technology is a distraction in school that impacts learning. Students will be more focused and hands on if the yonder is put into effect. Though being informed on current events will be taken away. Overall, I consider it effective.

Z Holmes pd 3
4/23/2019 10:05:03 am

i like that you pointed out more beneficial than harmful because students love to say " me being on my phone not stopping you from teaching " when infact it is. Teachers wont teach to a class who's not payin attention

C.Williams 6th prd
4/27/2019 07:36:14 pm

I know for a fact if I didn’t have my phone during class I would be more focused.

R. Garcia
4/19/2019 11:53:23 pm

I think the idea and premise behind Yondr is pretty wonderful. There is no doubt that our phones have become a great part of lives seeing that for many, they are the first thing we reach for in the morning and the last thing we let go at night not to mention the time we spend using them during the day. Perhaps we've become so used to having our phones that we barely notice how excessive our use of them truly is. Now, while the use of technology definitely enhances the learning experience, the truth is that it also provides many distractions that keeps students from obtaining the full range of information that should be obtained. One could argue that simply putting the phone away would get rid of the distraction but the distraction still remains from the anxiety that comes from wanting to check the phone for any notifications. I think there is a time and place for everything and Yondr really helps at reducing the problems that are caused from the excessive use of phones.

N.Brown8th
4/19/2019 11:54:24 pm

This can benfit us as teensin school because it will help us focus more on reality .This will help us tackle our problems head on rather than behind a screen with no help.This will also benfit the teacher to student ratio.This will help students connect and become more interactive with their peers and teachers.This will also benfit the schools academic policy.

T.Harris 6th period
4/19/2019 11:59:02 pm

Phones are useful in school rather teachers like it or not. It’s will help us more than harm us but it’s very distracting. We tend to get distracted easily when we we have online work but it’s open to be done in class because a message pops up. It’s up to you how u use it technology is impacts people in whatever way they choose too . School should be better than online work we should work out of books like we use to it’s better in many ways.

D. Hearne 8th
4/21/2019 05:37:13 pm

Kind of ironic that you’re showing us this and a good part of your class requires us to use our technology. Anyway, I agree that technology takes our focus away from our school work. I don’t agree with counselor saying that because the students were snapping their school rallies, they weren’t truly experiencing it. We record events like that for the sake of having visual memories. I can’t speak for their school, but I know our school’s pep rallies, games, or etc. are always lively phones out or not.

A.Crow 3rd pd
4/21/2019 08:46:17 pm

Although having no phones at school sound like a good idea to force students attention and actually learn something its actually not. My attitude is horrible but when i have my earphones in it keeps me out of trouble. My phone literally keeps me out of trouble.

L. Delley
4/21/2019 09:54:26 pm

Phones can be helpful in school for many reasons but can also be a distraction. It can take focus from our school work which can cause us to fail. However, it is helpful in regards to online resources. We can use online resources inside and outside of school to help us succeed in our school work. Although it can be a distraction, I believe the good outweighs the bad.

M Robinson 1st link
4/22/2019 02:49:05 am

I totally agree at school our cell phones should be put up at all times because if a teacher is teaching something that mean your missing out on important information on work to help with grades and cell phones are major distractions these day

Z Holmes pd 3
4/23/2019 10:00:57 am

I definitely agree with this! we lose our connection with education having our phones out 24/7

Z Holmes Pd 3
4/23/2019 09:58:29 am

Im neither for or against no phones in school. Phones are literally everybody's connection with the world, teachers as well, rather they admit it or not. So not having phones would in a way cripple us from the world for 8 hours. On the other hand, it could be beneficial i'm almost certain scores would improve for the school overall.

K Shavers 1st
4/23/2019 12:08:25 pm

i Agree because students know they shouldn’t use their cell phones in school to play games , or listen to music, or text their friends about the quiz they just took. Phones and tablets should be used responsibly and for educational purposes. Students could do research for English papers, or download an app that provides extra information on one of the chemical elements in the periodic table. When necessary, teachers could combat cheating by making students put their phones on “airplane mode” or any mode that will not allow them to send/receive any messages or use the Internet. Whenever there is a test, teachers can make students put their mobile devices in the front of the classroom until the test is over.

G.Musa 6th period
4/23/2019 06:28:42 pm

The idea of not having a device in our hands or pockets for 8 hours straight at school will definitely have it's pros and cons. We'll be more involved in reality. We'll be physically active, social and connect with our peers rather than hiding behind a screen to talk. The cons can affect those with relatives who need to stay in contact throughout the day and no phone can really affect that process. My though on this would be to experiment with such thing for a few weeks and note the students growth and stature at school.

C.Williams 6th prd
4/27/2019 07:34:01 pm

I believe that cell phones are the biggest distractors during school. Kids are unfocused during class, lunch, and passing periods because they are consumed with their cell phone. This idea will allow students to be more socially active and more engaged in classrooms. It’ll literally give you no choice but to pay attention to your surroundings. But if a school was to implement this technique, the school must have proper and up to date technology since we live in a world full of technology.


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