Let Me Add To That...

4/13/2016

Instructions: Use the following sentence starter to write a 17-word essay. Then, in all caps, add 10 more words to another post. You cannot exceed the word-count in either instance or it will be graded as a zero for not following directions.

Sentence Starter: [Create your own character and job] peered out from behind the curtain...[INSERT YOUR 17-WORD HERE IN ALL CAPS]. My example is below. Do not use what I wrote in any way.

Example: Blue, the investigative reporter, peered out from behind the curtain THEN DASHED ACROSS THE HALL, ALMOST DROPPING IT. TO DO SO, WOULD MEAN DESTROYING THE ENTIRE LEGACY.

INCLUDE: First initial AND last name AND class period.

CAUTION!! Do NOT embarrass me, yourself, your class, the English department, the school or your parents with tasteless, meaningless comments. This is for a grade.

Due: Fri., April 15, 2016 11:59 p.m. CST

Ah'Miya Jordan-Hawkins (3rd)

4/13/2016 02:38:18 am

Mariana, a Midwife, peered out from behind the curtain AND IMMEDIATELY DASHED TO HER CAR AS HER SHIFT ENDED. SHE WAS TERRIFIED OF THE NIGHT HOUR.

Renita Williams

4/13/2016 05:28:04 am

SHE KNEW HE WAS CLOSE AND HAD TO GET AWAY.

Shawn Reed2nd

4/16/2016 10:57:52 am

Jeffery , a bank accountant, peered from behind the curtain quickly. HE SAW IT WAS A CLEAR COAST AND HE RAN OFF WITH THE LOOT HE HAD STOLEN.

Nate Morris 2nd period

4/15/2016 02:19:44 am

James, the shop teacher, peered out from behind the curtain. THEN RAN TO THE BACK DOOR,L OH THE NOISE. HE HAD ONLY HEARD IT ONCE BEFORE, FIRE.

B perry 2nd

4/15/2016 07:39:56 pm

HE RAN TO GET A FIRE EXTINGUISHER AND BLASTED IT.

Keyvion smith

4/15/2016 03:17:43 am

Kevin peeked around out from behind the curtain to make sure no one was there.AND THEN HE BROKE OUT INTO A FAST PAST SPRINT THAT CAN RIVAL THE WORD'S FASTEST MAN TO MR.ANDREW'S ROOM TO AND OUT THE WINDOW WITH HIS STOLEN GOODS.

Keylon Carter 3rd period

4/16/2016 11:28:37 am

Jasmine , a stripper ,peered out from behind the curtain AND SPEED RACE TO THE BACK ROOM AS A CONSUMER TRIED TO SEXUALLY ASSAULT HER .SHE WAS TERRIFIED OF THAT RAPIST OF THE HOUR

Jessica Reaux-2ND

4/13/2016 03:21:55 am

Claudia, an amateur concrete artist, peered out from behind the curtain AND COULDN'T HELP BUT GASP. DESERTED, IN THE MIDDLE OF HER YARD, LIED THE MOST REASSURING DONATION.

Ah'Miya Jordan-Hawkins (3rd)

4/13/2016 05:37:09 am

THE DECAYING CORPSE OF A WOMAN. CLAUDIA SHRIEKED IN TERROR.

Perdue Keiarah 3rd

4/13/2016 11:46:04 pm

A PILE OF GOLD HIDDEN UNDER DISGUSTING OLD NEWS PAPER.

Nate Morris 2nd period

4/15/2016 02:23:20 am

A truck full of goods for the food bank downtown.

Renita Williams- 1st

4/13/2016 05:27:03 am

Jay, the President's closest advisor, peered out from behind the curtain, DARTED AROUND THE SECURITY AND DIRECTLY TO THE PRESIDENT. HE KNEW THE END WAS NEAR FOR ALL.

Joshua Williams per 1

4/13/2016 07:31:34 am

JAY KNEW THEY WERE COMING TO KIDNAP &TORTURE THE PRESIDENT

Demerion Cooks 2 PERIOD

4/13/2016 08:04:33 am

WHILE THE PRESIDENT WAS AVOIDING HIS FAMILY , HE THEN TEARED .

JaColby Pemberton 1st period

4/16/2016 10:35:52 am

Jody , the assistant surgeon , peered out from behind the curtain DESPERATELY LOOKING FOR EVERY TOOL HE NEEDED TO STOP THE CONSTANT FLOW OF NON STOP RED BLOOD

Joshua Williams 1st

4/13/2016 07:37:13 am

Karen the dramatic CEO of gossip peered out from behind the curtain COULDN'T HELP BUT SCREAM TILL HER LUNGS BLEED AS SHE TRIED TO BREAK OUT OF HIS EMBRACE.

Demerion Cooks 2 period

4/13/2016 08:00:04 am

Demerion, the God of distribution in hip hop peered out from behind the curtain. TO SAY 'ALL THE WORKERS MUST WORK NO ONE SHOULD WASTE TIME GO GET IT, RIGHT NOW !

L Villatoro 1st period

4/14/2016 03:24:47 am

TIME IS MONEY, MONEY IS TIME, STAY ON YOUR GRIND.

Perdue, Keiarah 3rd

4/13/2016 11:38:19 pm

The expert mechanic, known as Pop, peered out from behind the curtain AND GASPED FOR AIR AS HE STARTED AT A SPLIT IMAGE OF HIS SON THAT WAS DECEASED.

Jessica Reaux-2ND

4/14/2016 03:17:49 am

IT WAS A GRUESOME REMINDER; FAME CAME WITH A PRICE.

L Villatoro 1st period

4/14/2016 03:15:24 am

Aspen, the sneaky ninja, was out exploring the city one night. ASPEN CAME ACROSS FIVE GUYS OUTSIDE THEIR RESTAURANT ROBBING A YOUNG SEVENTEEN YEAR OLD GIRL FOR HER BUNS.

D Blakey

4/16/2016 04:51:20 am

THE YOUNG SEVENTEEN YEAR OLD SAID "YOU COULD'VE JUST ASKED".

Brittany Lynch

4/14/2016 06:39:19 am

She Knew he was close & had to get away from them.

Asia Thomas

4/14/2016 08:34:41 am

Melissa , a Songwriter , was writing a song in the studio. THEN SUDDENLY SOME ROBBERS CAME AND STOLE HER SONG BOOK AND HELD A GUN TO HER HEAD.

TyAngala R

4/14/2016 07:15:12 pm

SHE INSTANTLY MELTED, AND BEGAN TO CRY HER EYES OUT IN SO MUCH FEAR!

Jordan Castillo

4/15/2016 09:08:39 am

AND SAID DONT SCREAM FOR HELP CAUSE NO ONE COMING .

C. Villanueva

4/16/2016 05:02:00 am

SHE DOESNT MOVE IN FEAR BUT SHE HEARS THE SHOT

5th period *

4/14/2016 08:36:46 am

TyAngala R

4/14/2016 07:14:08 pm

Mirah, the famous singer, peered out from behind the curtain, REALIZING THERE WAS NO AUDIENCE IN SIGHT.

M Gill 1st period

4/15/2016 10:27:00 am

THIS HAS TO BE A JOKE MAYBE MY CONTACTS BROKE!!!

D Dollar 2nd

4/14/2016 08:36:05 pm

Tom, the first round pick of the draft, peered out from behind the curtain, FINALLY REALIZED THAT HE REACHED HIS DREAM TO BECOME A NFL FOOTBALL PLAYER FOR HIS FATHER'S TEAM

B Perry 2nd

4/14/2016 09:56:02 pm

Rover, the acrobat, peered out from behind the curtain,TOOK A DEEP BREATH,PEERED AT THE AUDIENCE AND RAN ON STAGE AS THE CROWD WENT WILD.

Jakayla Taylor 2nd

4/15/2016 12:22:40 am

SHE KNEW SHE WAS GOING TO BE A GREAT ACROBAT.

Kevion Warren

4/15/2016 03:59:43 am

NOT CARING HOW MANY PEOPLE WAS THERE, BUT CARING ON THE FACT OF HOW GOOD SHE DID HER SHOW

I canales 2

4/14/2016 10:00:18 pm

Slow, cautious, careful little girl peered from behind the curtian. SLIGHTLY STARTLED SHE RAN ACROSS THE ROOM AND HID.

L Randle 2nd period

4/14/2016 10:58:16 pm

Sara Ceo of Old Navy , peered out from behind the curtain , SHE STOPPED WITH A GASP SHE COULDN'T BELIEVE WHAT WAS BEFORE HER BLOOD FROM AN ANGRY CUSTOMER.

Jakayla Taylor (2nd)

4/15/2016 12:20:08 am

Tonya the babysitter peered out from the curtain WAS HIDING FROM THE KILLER WHO WAS TRYING TO FIND HER AND THE GIRL THAT WAS SCARED

A. Castillo

4/15/2016 12:20:17 am

Jack, the well known bounty hunter, peered out from behind the curtain AND PROCEEDED TO SET THEM ABLAZE AS HIS HOSTAGE CRIED, WEEPED, AND YELLED FOR HELP BEHIND THEM.

Kevion Warren

4/15/2016 03:57:23 am

Bob, the construction worker, peered out from behind the curtain on career day. IN DOING SO HE STEPPED ON PART OF THE CURTAIN AND SLIPPED CAUSING THE WHOLE THING TO COLLAPSE.

Evan Morris 3rd period

4/15/2016 08:12:26 am

Jake the actor peered out from behind the curtain , SHOUTING TO BE OR NOT TO BE FORGETTING THE REST OF HIS LINES FOR THE PLAY

A. Malta

4/16/2016 10:21:51 am

IN DOING SO HE FLED THE STAGE IN COMPLETE EMBARRASSMENT

Jordan Castillo 1st period

4/15/2016 08:56:49 am

Jame$ the doctor peered out from behind the curtain AND SEEN A BRIGHT SHINY GORGEOUS MESMERIZING LIGHT OVER HIS PATIENT WHO WAS CRYING TEARS OF JOY.

Lashundrell C

4/15/2016 09:33:03 am

THE JOY OF THE PATIENT DESCRIBE AN ABILITY OF COMPLETION.

Lashundrell C.

4/15/2016 09:17:17 am

Olivia,the nurse peered out from behind the curtains,SURPRISING THE PATIENT FAMILY WITH NEWS ABOUT THE NEW BABY THAT HAS BEEN BORN TODAY AT 6AM

M Gill 1st period

4/15/2016 10:06:13 am

Leelah the professional dancer peered out from behind the curtains, AND SAID " OH MY GOD THE SHOW IS SO PACKED THIS YEAR I HAVE TO KILL IT!"

TyAngala R.

4/15/2016 06:57:52 pm

Kobe, the basketball player, peered out from behind the curtain, waiting on his name to be called, it would be his last appearance in the NBA game.

LaMondrá Johnson

4/15/2016 07:05:17 pm

Jonzé, the actor, peered out from behind the curtain AND THEN RAN OUT ON STAGE IN A HURRY TO SATISFY HIS AUDIENCE WHO "BOO'D" THE OTHERS.

Rontavious Duncan (2nd period)

4/15/2016 08:17:10 pm

Bank Dog, an amateur rapper, peered out from behind the curtain AND COULDN'T HELP BUT GASP. HE SEES HOW BIG THE CROWD IS AND DOESNT WANT TO LET HIS FANS AND FAMILY DOWN.

chertavia smalley 5th period

4/15/2016 09:40:33 pm

Watermelondrea the canceler at Ratchet Girls High, peered out from behind the curtain AND PULLED THE TRACKS OUT OF A STUDENTS HAIR.

Jerrol Jackson 3rd Period

4/15/2016 10:42:20 pm

Drake peered out from behind the curtain , and look at his manager in said , OMG 40 WE ARE SOLD FOR 7th TIME LETS DO ONE MORE TIME.

Tyrieck McCowin 2nd period

4/16/2016 02:42:41 am

Jake, from State Farm, peered out from behind the curtain, DASHED OUT OF HIS OFFICE TO A DESPERATE CUSTOMER. THE CUSTOMER HOUSE IS UNDER WATER AND DAMAGED.

D.Blakley

4/16/2016 04:48:04 am

Chief Keef, the famous rapper , peered behind the curtain, TO RECEIVE HIS FIRST EVER BET AWARD. HE THEN GRABBED THE MIC AND SAID " ITS ABOUT TIME ".

^ D Blakley *1st Period

4/16/2016 04:56:11 am

Tavares Moore

4/16/2016 05:09:46 am

HE WAS THEN ESCORTED OFF THE STAGE FOR WAVING GUNS.

Maya kelly 5th link

4/16/2016 09:19:22 am

C. Villanueva 5th pd

4/16/2016 04:59:49 am

Clarissa, the fast food cashier, peered out from behind the curtain. SHE SILENTLY TIP TOED PAST THE MANAGER AND SPRINTED OUT THE DOOR WHERE A CAR WAS WAITING...

Tavares Moore

4/16/2016 05:04:37 am

CJ ,the gang banger, peered from behind the curtain, AND TOLD BIG SMOKE , RYDER , AND SWEET THAT IT WAS SOME DUDES DISRESPECTING THEIR SET PRETTY HARD.

Ashley Lopez 2nd period

4/16/2016 07:49:27 am

Aaliyah, the model, peered out from behind the curtain... AS SHE WAS WALKING THE RUN WAY SHE FELL, FACE FIRST ALL YOU COULD HEAR WAS BOOM!!

C. Moreno 2nd

4/16/2016 10:04:47 am

WHEN SHE GOT UP, BLOOD WAS RUNNING DOWN HER NOSE.

I. Chancellor 5th period

4/16/2016 10:27:58 am

SHE GOT UP,AND CONTINUED WALKING DOWN THE LONG RUNWAY.

Maya Kelly 5th

4/16/2016 09:17:19 am

Maya Broadway
Maya dashed out from behind the curtain and began to sing and dance on the count 1,2,3

KeAmbria Tankersley 3rd period

4/16/2016 09:27:13 am

Jamie, the magazine writer, peered from behind the curtain THEN SPRINTED DOWN THE AISLE. IT WAS THEN SHE HAD REALIZED SHE HAD AN INTERESTING MAGAZINE HEADER.

C. Moreno 2nd pd

4/16/2016 10:00:41 am

Maria, the crazy latina lady, peered out from behind the curtain. She couldn't believe what she just heard. How could someone not like salsa on their precious tacos?!

C. Moreno 2nd pd

4/16/2016 10:07:27 am

Maria, the crazy latina lady, peered out from behind the curtain. SHE COULD'NT BELIEVE WHAT SHE HEARD. HOW COULD SOMEONE NOT LIKE SALSA ON THEIR PRECIOUS TACOS?!

A. Malta 3rd p

4/16/2016 10:14:39 am

Larson, former secret service agent, peered out from behind the curtain, SHACKING AS HE BECAME AWARE OF FLOTUS EXTRAMARITAL AFFAIRS AND HOW IT COULD END THE PRESIDENTS TERM!

I. Chancellor 5th period

4/16/2016 10:21:02 am

Cody,the history teacher,peered out from behind the curtain,AND THERE HE SAW HIS FAMILY AND HIGH SCHOOL TEACHERS, GIVING HIS HISTORY STUDENTS A STANDING OVATION.

A. Cain 5th

4/16/2016 10:29:26 am

Axel, the Amazingly great basketball player peered out from the curtain, HOLDING A BASKETBALL IN ONE HAND AND VANILLA CAKE IN THE OTHER. FOR THAT HE HAD A SECOND PASSION AND IT WAS TO BAKE.

Alexis Fowler 2nd period

4/16/2016 10:36:24 am

Martha saw her husband peered out behind the curtain WITH ANOTHER WOMEN. WHEN HE SAW HIS WIFE EYES FILL WITH PAIN HE IMMEDIATLY ASKED FOR FORGIVENESS.

Jacob Hurd

4/16/2016 10:36:51 am

Josh, A famous You Tuber, peered out from the behind the curtain. HE COULDN'T HELP BUT GASP AT THE CROWD THAT SHOWED UP AT HIS CAR MEET THERE WAS OVER ONE HUNDRED CARS AT THE MEET.

Alexis Fowler 2nd

4/16/2016 10:38:33 am

Martha, a wife saw her husband peered out behind the curtain WITH ANOTHER WOMEN. WHEN HE SAW HIS WIFE EYES FILL WITH PAIN HE IMMEDIATLY ASKED FOR FORGIVENESS.
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Trevon Brooks 3rd Period

4/16/2016 10:57:23 am

Dave, the musician, peered out from behind the curtain WITH A PIANO. HE PLAYED ENDLESSLY AS THE CROWD WAS PLEASED BY THE SWEET SOUND OF MUSIC.

T-Dewberry

4/16/2016 11:59:00 am

HIS MUSIC TOUCHED EVERY HEART THAT LISTENED TO IT DAILY

Terrence Dewberry

4/16/2016 11:51:00 am

Mike, a simple mechanic, peered out from behind the curtain AND CHEERED AS HE HEARD THE MAGIC WORDS FROM MAURY SAYING YOU ARE NOT THE BABY'S FATHER.

T-Dewberry 3rd period

4/16/2016 11:57:41 am

mike, a simple mechanic, peered at from behind the curtain AND CHEERED AS HE HEARD THE MAGIC WORDS FROM MAURY SAYING YOU ARE NOT THE BABY'S FATHER

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