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Finish the Story...

9/25/2021

 
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"A husband came home and saw that his wife..."

Finish this story (but read "The Catch" below first):
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The Catch:

1. INCLUDE: Nick Name AND Class Block.


2. You can only write nine (9) words. Respond in no more than nine (9) words and no less than nine (9) words.

3. Your nine words cannot be the same or close to what someone else wrote. (See example below)

4. The story has to be a complete thought. It's a 18-word story. I've given you the beginning in nine (9) words. Now, you have to write the middle and ending in nine (9) words only!

5. You DO NOT have to respond to other stories.

Example:

Okay: You must write an original nine words that come from your imagination.

Not Okay: You must write nine words from your own imagination so get busy.

Those two sentences sound alike so the second one is not acceptable. So in other words, do not rearrange someone else's words. Use your own thinking, imagination and critical thinking skills to add your own words.


CAUTION!! Do NOT embarrass me, yourself, your class, the English department, the school, your family or your upbringing with tasteless, meaningless comments. This is for a grade.

DISCLAIMER: If you do not respond AND comment on TWO others, you will not receive credit for this assignment. It's all or nothing.

WARNING: If you post even one second past midnight, your comment might appear to be posted, but as soon as it is opened to be graded, it will automatically delete.


​​Due Fri., October 1, 2021 11:59 p.m. ICT
March ( ap lit & Block B creative writing)
9/29/2021 03:20:43 am

Knife on hand, Gripping with anger good night Honey.

March( ap lit & Block B creative writing)
9/29/2021 03:23:50 am

I thought that comma was a period LOL!!!!

Kevin (AP Lit Block D)
9/29/2021 03:59:36 am

I decided to make mine "happy" because of this.

Ex (Ap Lit)
9/29/2021 04:45:27 am

You should xD. March sentence pretty dark not gonna lie.

Benny (Creative Writing F)
9/30/2021 09:15:41 pm

Took a dark turn real fast, I love it.

SaoChi (Creative Writing Block B)
9/29/2021 03:28:20 am

on the floor, crying and screaming, as she collapses.

Stanley Creative Writing B
9/29/2021 03:34:48 am

kissing his brother, with anger the husband shoots them.

Ex (ap Lit)
9/29/2021 04:43:05 am

I never thought they would such a thing!!!!!!!

Asia Creative Writing B
9/29/2021 06:54:16 am

Deep, wayyyyy toooooo deep.

Benny (Creative Writing F)
9/30/2021 09:16:33 pm

That escalated fast....

Kevin (AP Lit Block D)
9/29/2021 03:58:32 am

... was asleep peacefully. Lying next to her, everything's perfect.

Brendon (creative writing F)
9/29/2021 04:49:07 am

Too happy, man, too happy.

Vivi Creative Writing B
9/29/2021 04:28:55 am

.. holding on tight to their child on his knees.

Ex (Ap Lit)
9/29/2021 04:48:17 am

Netflix and chill without him now he very mad.

Brendon (creative writing F)
9/29/2021 04:48:45 am

...tying a noose, about to take her own life.

March (Ap lit & creative writing B)
9/29/2021 08:16:41 am

Edgar Allan Poe of the 21st century.

allie (creative writing block F)
9/29/2021 04:52:21 am

on the bed with a rose on her lips.

Lara (Creative Writing Block F)
9/29/2021 04:53:31 am

...holds a pregnancy stick. Her smile ever so brightly.

Asia Creative Writing B
9/29/2021 06:57:56 am

Happy story!!! Very joyful.

Lewis(Creative writing block B)
9/29/2021 06:06:04 am

was cuddling with another man, and grabbed his dagger.

Phakhom (Creative Writing Block F)
9/29/2021 06:24:44 am

sitting on a tree, picking some apples for him.

EngEng Creative Writing B
9/29/2021 06:38:03 am

"A husband came home and saw that his wife was cheating on him with his own best friend."

Asia Creative Writing B
9/29/2021 06:53:09 am

is with his stepbrother in the kitchen cooking.

Prim (English 9C/G)
9/29/2021 07:25:35 am

trying to play with fire by using her hands.

Jack Eng9 C&G
9/29/2021 07:55:37 am

is sitting on the couch and enjoying her meal.

First (creative writing F)
9/29/2021 07:57:45 am

was making a toothpaste oreo for him to try.

Mulan creative writing F
9/29/2021 09:58:18 am

was cooking a wonderful beef steak waiting for him.

Kim-Hun Creative Writing Block E
9/29/2021 10:17:01 am

He broke down in anger and walked out of the room with a plan.

Nina W Creative Writing Block B + AP Lit Block D
9/29/2021 10:32:12 am

(A husband came home and saw that his wife,) has been mutilated, her guts splattered across the room

Sinny (Creative Writing Block F)
9/30/2021 09:19:29 am

why am i reading this before bedtime

Mike (English 9)
10/1/2021 05:46:35 am

The best ending I've ever heard in a while.

Asia Creative Writing B
9/29/2021 08:58:13 pm

A husband came home and saw that his wife, is with her stepbrother in the kitchen cooking.

Hazeljoy Creative Writing B
9/30/2021 12:27:09 am

A husband came home and saw that his wife, is dressed lightly, in the garden watering the plants.

janice (ap lit)
9/30/2021 01:14:27 am

.... was holding their baby, and she looked so pretty.

Pro
9/30/2021 01:56:52 am

A husband came home and saw that his wife was in bed with someone. It's not human. Run.

Beryl Creative Writing F
9/30/2021 02:12:50 am

You made my day. xD

Mike (English 9)
10/1/2021 05:43:31 am

creature: "why are you running? why are you running!?"

Shera (English 9)
10/1/2021 11:48:25 am

AHAHAHAHA, THAT MADE ME CRY, IMAGINE.

Beryl Creative Writing F
9/30/2021 02:14:05 am

was asleep, curled up on the dark leather couch.

Shera (English 9)
10/1/2021 11:49:59 am

Ah, making it peaceful I see, add a pool of blood dripping from the couch and how the husband didn’t notice until he sat down next to her body. ;D

leah (ap lit, block d)
9/30/2021 04:09:44 am

A husband came home and saw that his wife morphed into a bagel, which he toasted for breakfast.

Nadia (Creative Writing Block F)
9/30/2021 04:38:40 am

A husband came home and saw that his wife was enjoying a huge tub of salted caramel icecream.

Mim (Creative Writing Block F)
9/30/2021 04:41:12 am

A husband came home and saw that his wife is watching Coldplay and BTS 'My Universe' music video.

Sinny (Creative Writing Block F)
9/30/2021 09:17:24 am

You are my universe and I just want to put you first——

Jia Ying (English 9 blockC/G)
10/1/2021 10:09:03 am

And you, you are my universe and I~

Praew (Creative Writing Block F)
9/30/2021 05:56:34 am

A husband came home and saw that his wife was lying on the floor, fighting for her life.

PunPun Creative Writing F
9/30/2021 09:01:35 am

A husband came home and saw that his wife and son never return, they were gone for good.

Sinny (Creative Writing Block F)
9/30/2021 09:18:10 am

"...giggling creepily with her mouth full of blood."

Prim (English 9C/G)
10/1/2021 07:16:24 am

It look so creepy and scary.

Jabari (creative writing E)
9/30/2021 07:17:57 pm

was cooking meals for the upcoming party.

Jabari (creative writing E)
9/30/2021 07:20:38 pm

+ smells nice

Benny (Creative Writing F)
9/30/2021 09:13:42 pm

has disappeared; however, a smirk appeared on his face.

Christine (Creative Writing Block F)
9/30/2021 09:18:06 pm

A husband came home and saw that his wife, flipping through the cabinet urgently trying to find something.

Auto (creative writing block F)
9/30/2021 10:32:38 pm

A husband came home and saw that his wife is blowing whistles cheering their son competing squid game.

Mint (Creative Writing F )
10/1/2021 12:34:23 am

A husband came home and saw that his wife is dancing joyfully, filming a content on her TikTok.

Peter (english 9 block C and G)
10/1/2021 01:10:37 am

is preparing dinner for her husband and her son

Prim (English 9C/G)
10/1/2021 07:12:35 am

She is such a very nice wife.

Angel (Creative Writing Block B) link
10/1/2021 01:21:31 am

A husband came home and saw that his wife was booking an airplane ticket for their fantastic trip.

Tanya (English 9C)
10/1/2021 01:32:17 am

A husband came home and saw that his wife was baking a birthday cake for him, he's surprised!

Miumiu (Creative writing block F)
10/1/2021 01:58:19 am

was cooking dinner. Oh no, it got completely burnt.

Mike (English 9)
10/1/2021 05:36:05 am

was nowhere to be seen in the entire house.

Morn Creative Writing Block F
10/1/2021 05:57:38 am

was smiling softly, gaze adorn to their divorce certificates.

Faith (AP Lit)
10/1/2021 08:54:15 am

A husband came home and saw that his wife left dinner on the table and a goodbye letter.

Aom (Creative Writing Block F)
10/1/2021 08:55:07 am

is binge-watching the show without waiting for him.

Jia Ying (English 9 )
10/1/2021 10:03:56 am

was hiding a guitar, surprised that he came early.

Shera (English 9)
10/1/2021 11:44:41 am

was decapitated, whereas her limbs were chained somewhere else.


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