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10/20/2025

 
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Think of your life like a draft—you can always go back and make edits. Missed chances? Try again. Different dream? Chase it. It’s your story, so write it the way you want it to end.

Do you get it? Really GET it.

Every day is a new draft. You can rewrite your story, edit your choices, and choose a different ending—no matter how many chapters came before. 
Let's Write! Thoughts? Can you for real?
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​​Due Fri., October 24, 11:00 p.m. CST
Martinez J 7B
10/22/2025 01:15:16 pm

Yes I do get it because people often think they found what they will do for the rest of their life but in some cases there are a few who change their life after a long time of doing a specific job/skill.

Watson S 1A
10/22/2025 08:55:07 pm

I agree with your statement, people change career paths all the time and it is possible for their success to grow faster. Not everything in life is going to be permanent when something changes, you have to work with what you have.

Mariah Torrence 6b
10/24/2025 12:50:13 pm

it's true that getting a job can still be challenging. However, with hard work and determination anyone can achieve what they want

Cervantes Y 2A
10/23/2025 09:17:32 am

I agree because sometimes people think they found what they will do but they don't know if anything happens in their life

Calito V. 5B
10/22/2025 03:20:08 pm

Yes I get but sometimes people have to understand not everybody will be able to have those great chances of doing what they really want. Because they cannot choose that sometimes people have horrible living situations or don't know how to take the first step. It's not easy to just go back and not change little things like going to the right place or talking to the right people. Sometimes you don't have the money or the connections to live your dreams.

Watson S 1A
10/22/2025 08:59:47 pm

I somewhat agree with you, for the reason that with the resources we have today you would think that it'll be easy to get a job. Actually they're rarely accepting applications, so I see where that could be complicated. However, with enough hard work, you can do anything you want to, if you really want it.

Fraire.Y 1A
10/23/2025 06:44:48 pm

Yes, they might be hard to find resources to get work opportunity but there are no reason why you couldn't try hard enough to find something you can work on even if it is by helping others to make a change in your life to get things started .

Gracie Ramos
10/23/2025 09:46:35 am

I agree with the statement that there are people that don't have that same opportunity to change or create the life they want to live in. And it is due to unfortunate circumstances that prevent them from taking that leap to make that choice.

Banda N 1A
10/23/2025 11:15:50 am

That's understandable but regardless there's always some way to start your dream life even if its little by little. Many people who have had a terrible start find ways to make their dreams come true. Even if someone who's in a situation like that there's no same in asking questions on how to start it.

Martinez G 7B
10/24/2025 02:04:39 pm

You don't need a good upbringing to have a good future. A lot of successful people come up from nothing. Your past will only affect your future if you let that happen.

Larios, A. 7B
10/24/2025 08:14:24 pm

I understand but someone inspired me that i can do what i want no matter where i grew up in and how life has treated me or my choices. That person was the first to graduate HS and College. Got their degree in Psychology even though his siblings were in jail.

Watson S 1A
10/22/2025 08:52:01 pm

I understand the quote. It made me think about when people express in a disappointed way that they really wanted or should've had a certain career or IQ, thinking it's too late. However the message behind it can always mean something deeper like breaking the cycle in your family. No matter how long it takes, if you complete a goal that you made for yourself, you succeeded.

Cervantes Y 2A
10/23/2025 09:14:46 am

I agree the quote made me think the same thing as you because allot of people do think some times its already late

Gracie Ramos
10/23/2025 09:43:36 am

I agree that the meaning behind the message can have a deeper meaning that can include breaking a cycle in your family and turning your life around for the better is significant.

Larios, A. 7B
10/24/2025 08:15:42 pm

I agree with your statement, i hadn’t really thought about this. But your family and background do not define who you are or who you will become.

Washington B 1A
10/23/2025 09:50:04 am

i agree with this also becuase it made me thing that people think its too late to do what they wanted maybe because of there age or where they are in life

Skylar B. 6B
10/24/2025 08:48:27 am

I see your point exactly because you can always reach your potentially no matter what your background is or IQ.

Cervantes Y 2A
10/23/2025 09:20:08 am

I understand the quote because it made me think when I was reading it that you are not limited by your past or by your age to become what you want to be for your life

Washington B 1A
10/23/2025 09:52:24 am

i agree with this too because its never too late to do anything espeacly if it's something you've always wanted to do

Gracie Ramos
10/23/2025 09:40:52 am

I understand the message that everyday is a new opportunity to change the direction of where your life is headed. I think it tells us that it's never too late for anyone and we have the power to make the decision to create the life we want to live.

Banda N 1A
10/23/2025 11:14:05 am

Exactly every decision you make can change your life in hopefully good ways and there's chance everyday to make your life go in many different ways. If you want it to go down a certain way take the steps to kickstart it.

Krystal V. 2A
10/24/2025 11:39:20 am

I agree. There's nothing like the present to mend the wounds of the past. Every day truly is a new chance to do better and show up for yourself.

Mariah torrence 6b
10/24/2025 12:42:54 pm

yes,I agree with the message.Every day is a fresh chance to shape our lives and pursue our goals its good to know that we have the ability to make choices that lead us towards the life we want

Washington B 1A
10/23/2025 09:48:24 am

yes i get it because not everyone gets the opportunity to do what they wanted to, it could've been the life style they had growing up. Or maybe they just didn't have the money to go to college for it and study it. But it is never too late too be what you might have been

Banda N 1A
10/23/2025 11:12:10 am

You can always change up what you want to do with your life. If you're unhappy with the way your life has gone you can always take the steps to be what you wanted to be. People have the idea that once you pick a path for your life you have to stick to it no matter what but that's simply not true. It's never to late to do what you truly want to do.

Fraire.Y 1A
10/23/2025 06:37:44 pm

Yes, not just because you chose to do something when thinking of what to do doesn't mean you have to stick to it there are many different things you can do you can change what you are interested in now and you can move past what you think you wanted to do and truly do what you want to do .

Martinez G 7B
10/24/2025 02:16:42 pm

Not all people can navigate through life without their trauma affecting them. Without the right help, many people live devastating lives because of their past. Sometimes it's even impossible because people have terrible experiences.

nevaeh 5b
10/24/2025 06:36:00 pm

I can relate to this, some people go through things that are really hard to heal from, and it can make life feel hard without the right support.

Joaquin J 2A
10/23/2025 12:38:11 pm

Anything you do is a opportunity to change what yo do with your life. I believe you can change your life/story by the choices you make daily.

Calito V.
10/24/2025 02:25:11 pm

Agree with your statement because the choice you make can improve your life if you make it a daily habit.

Joaquin J 2A
10/23/2025 12:40:23 pm

Everyday is a choice for you to rewrite the mistkes you did and make the right choices. I agree with everything because you are your own person.

Jaidyn T 7B
10/24/2025 08:43:39 am

I agree because you are correct, everyday is a choice for you to rewrite the mistakes and its never to late to be what you want to be.

Fraire.Y 1A
10/23/2025 06:34:41 pm

Yesi understand, there are many people that think because they had one mess up in there life before they get to do what they love to do and they dont decide to do what they always wanted to do because of that one mistake that they could forget about or fully move one form .

Skylar B. 6B
10/24/2025 08:56:04 am

I agree with your statement because yes a lot of people think that one mistake defines you.

Skylar B. 6B
10/24/2025 08:43:57 am

Yes I understand because in life you are always giving chances to be better, make better decisions, and start fresh. Your future is in your hands, you can always change it regardless of you past mistakes.

Jaidyn T 7B
10/24/2025 08:52:10 am

I agree because it is never to late to try again and have your future the way you want.

Krystal V. 2A
10/24/2025 11:36:15 am

I agree. Our life really is in our hands and nothing that's happened in the past can prevent our future from being better, because its the past for a reason. We only truly have the present moment to make better choices towards the future we want.

Calito V.
10/24/2025 02:28:29 pm

I agree you have the choice to better your life and you can change your life regardless of your mistakes. Because no one can change it but you.

Martinez G 7B
10/24/2025 11:10:00 am

I believe that you can change your story. You don't have a set future so you have the ability to make it the way you choose. Even though you can't change the past, that isn't going to stop you from having a different future.

Krystal V. 2A
10/24/2025 11:32:06 am

I agree with the sentiment that we are basically the authors of our own story and like the post says we can "rewrite" and "revise" our "story" to fit the narrative we want said story to have, because life really is what you make of it and what you can take away from the good and the painful experiences. You can either use these experiences to shape you into a stronger individual and the person you want to become, or let it rip you apart and destroy you. Even though this is all true, I personally find that it's not always that simple. Some experiences just mess people up so much that picking up that hypothetical pencil/pen is difficult and the "story" just keeps going "unedited".

nevaeh 5b
10/24/2025 06:34:48 pm

I agree. Some things are really hard to move past, but I like how you said we can still grow from them.

Mariah Torrence 6b
10/24/2025 12:33:45 pm

yes you can for real because everyday is a new chance to do something to be better in your life its like a redo

nevaeh 5b
10/24/2025 06:33:42 pm

I agree because this message can also mean breaking family cycles and changing your life for the better. It’s about learning from the past and choosing a new path that makes you happier.

Larios, A. 7B
10/24/2025 08:10:48 pm

Yes i do get it, i feel like a lot of people don’t try again for their dream because they feel like the first time you messed it up. When it is not at all true. If i am passionate about something i need to keep trying and getting up again and again until i know i tried everything in my power to make it.


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